Prompt: "what if"
Water
Trickling from the
Tap,
Not too hot and
Not too
Cold,
Rising up the
Porcelain wall and
Streaming over to
Rush down the other
Side.
Slithering
Across the
Tile,
Filling the
Floor like a
Pool at high
Tide.
On and
On,
Attracting droplets,
Expanding,
Extending.
People
Perching on
Rooftops or
Clinging to
Ornately carved
Headboards,
Legs
Churning the lukewarm
Liquid
Fusing together,
Lungs sucking in
Moisture,
Gills forming along
Ribcages,
Until
Someone
Swims down to
Pull the small rubber
Plug.
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What an imaginative If and the ending makes me laugh. Such great visuals. Well done!
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I was going for a Gabriel Garcia-Marquezish magical realism feel...glad you liked it!
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